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:iconlunis-neko:
The text in the header and footer strips is hard to read. It reminds me of vista because of the header image, but despite that, the whole design is beautiful.

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:iconaetherfunk:
Thank you very much! It does look sorta like Vista, now that I think about it. But in my humble opinion, Vista looks nice.

I will add some more contrast there.

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:iconsulexes:
awsome.. would let the active page in the menu have a light or something though.

B-E-AUTIFUL=)

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:icondenoir:
Very beautiful!



Somewhat empty at the moment though :)

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:iconaetherfunk:
Hmm, thank you for the suggestion, I will give it a try.

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:iconaetherfunk:
Thanks! I am still unsatisfied with the content area. Any critiques for it?

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:icondenoir:
I'd try to give it more structure by adding a darker background and some thin lines ;)

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:iconsulexes:
you don't have to though=p

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:iconaetherfunk:
I did, when I made the background darker, contrast was lost elsewhere. Do you have suggestions on how I could make the content area look less boring?

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:iconsulexes:
maybe give that a slighly darker color..
or have like a gradient backgrouns on it?
don't know

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